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A/N:

This was written about 4 years ago on my original Fanfiction.net account. And the four years ago it was an interactive story where people would send in ideas of what the Zatch Bell characters would be like ten years from after the show ended with the most random jobs possible. Again this was written 4 years ago so I have gone through and edited a bit but if I missed something please let me know in the comments! I have over 30 chapters of this that I will be editing and attempting to post every couple of days and on a side note all the “a”s are supposed to be part of the Italian accent.

Reunion

Chapter 1

Falgore: Take the Trash out Already!

“Oh gawd, I, a, can’t, a, believe it,” An elderly woman walked behind a man in his thirties. “You’re, a, Parco Falgore?”

The garbage man upon hearing his name turned around to face the old woman, whose garbage he was throwing into the truck. “Yes, a, you, a, remember me?”

The old woman laughed, “That a, scandal with the a, hotel maid was on the a, news for only a, seven months if not a, more!”

“I’m a sorry, but I have other houses to a, do.” Falgore jumped on the back of the truck and gave his famous brain-less smile.

Every day he followed that same routine. Pick up trash, avoid people that talk about the scandal, and pick up more people’s trash. At the end of another normal day Falgore stumbled into his trailer home and picked up the mail at his door.

A strange letter, the envelope was pink with the airmail striping along the side caught Falgore’s eye. Before he ever opened his mail he always washed his hands. He may currently be a garbage man, but he could remember the days of letters smelling like perfume, his ladies line from before the scandal.

The letter in the pink envelope was written with tight small cursive letters:

June 17

Dear Parco Falgore,

It has been almost ten years sense the Mamodo battle was concluded; I figure its time for a reunion. In two months meet every one in Africa… Egypt. Two months from today, August 17, will be the ten-year anniversary. Enclosed are two tickets to Egypt. Bring your significant other, best friend, or something like that. The hotel will be ready for your arrival.

I look forward to seeing you!

Falgore looked on the back of the letter and the envelope, who ever had sent it hadn’t signed it. Falgore pulled out the ticket and nearly fainted.

The tickets were first class! He hadn’t flown first class, or any class for that matter, sense the scandal then a thought struck him. Scandal, scandal, he had been found guilty in a scandal, what would every one be thinking of him? Kiyo Takamine probably was a professor at Tokyo University and here he was a lonely trash man, still single, and slathering on extra pounds.

Falgore raised his fist to the air, “All right! That’s what I’ll a do!” he opened his fridge and took out the chocolate cake and placed it safely aside. Then he through out all his fast food, and every thing except the veggies and fruits and his special chocolate cake.

“There! You a will last me for two months, until then I can’t eat anything else.

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Two weeks later

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“Fooooooood, foooooooood!” Falgore groaned as he staggered up to his coworkers drooling holding his arm out like a deranged zombie.

“Hey leave my hamburger alone, eat your carrot and half an apple!” the man driving the garbage truck growled.

Falgore couldn’t take it. He openly began to cry, “I need a girl friend! Please? Be my a girlfriend?!”

“Um. I’m a guy….”

A/N:

Falgore makes me laugh really hard. Hope you liked. Kanchome is next.

I don’t own Zatch Bell

Flagore the trashman was my idea

A/N:

This is a pokemon fanfic that takes place in a region yet to be discovered by the games. Just open your minds eyes and go for it I hope for some honest Criticism just nothing to hurtful… kay?

Disclaimer: Pokemon belongs to Nintendo

Meika

Chapter 1

Wisteria Fields

A child ran by herself in a small town, passing many smiling faces of her cheerful neighbors. The girl sported gray purple hair pulled into two thick braids that rested just below her shoulders bouncing off her lose brown T-shirt with every step. She dashed out of the town and headed into the wisteria field surrounding the small town. The wisteria trees climbed man made rails and shaded the light starved ground ground with heavy hanging flowers of both pink and purple. Their thick sweet sent hung through the air. The young girl dashed heading towards a collection of green trees. Butterfrees scattered into the air and Sentrets dashed along the ground.

Nearing the green trees the slight sound of a bubbling river trickled through the trees. Not even stopping to catch her breath the young girl kept running. She reached the river where muddy water rushed violently, splashing beneath a raised wooden bridge. The girl paused at the bridge and looked to the large tree just on the clearing by the other side. Her foots steps clunked against the wood she ran with all of her might. And with with every ounce of strength the young girl jumped up on the trees lowest branch. Heaving herself up she grunted, the tree made a sudden crack and before the young girl could react the branch broke with her still clinging.

She crashed to the ground, chin first. She then attempted to get up, failing she brefily glanced around, her arms previously scabbed had started bleeding slightly, but her ankle was pinned beneath the branch twice her weight. Failing to push the branch off her leg she broke down crying.

A girl only about 3 years older ran up an noticed the young girls pain. Long straight golden brown hair rested in the middle of her back, just below the girls waist against her pale pink dress. Strangely her face seemed a blur and her words echoed as words but not a voice. A Beautifly was called out by the girl and it kicked up a strong wind by flapping its wings and and with the help of the young trainer the two lifted the thick branch off the young girl. This young trainer then had her Beautifly help lift the young girl onto her back and by flapping its wings gently the Beautifly attempted to ease the weight.

Upon entering the own the young girl was pealed off the back of the other girl the young girl cried “Thank you -chan!” but was drown out by a loud music, some sort of song. The world gradually faded into black with the music focusing and becoming clearer.

A much older girl with gray purple hair opened her eyes, she laid on a white bed with cream pillows. Rolling over she forced the pillow out from under her head and then over her head to block the song blaring from her alarm clock. Her arm reached out from the comforter and blindly grasped at the night stand, knocking over her alarm clock and turning the volume even louder. Sighing the girl sat up and started rubbing her eyes. She flung her feet over the bed and reached down for her alarm clock and turned the loud music off. She stood and looked out the window with blurry eyes, admiring her third story view of miles and miles of of well maintained wisteria trees. She stumbled out of her room. On her door a wooden name plate shaped like a wisteria flower read “Kari”.

She walked down stairs, glancing at the door with the same name plate reading “Riri” she shrugged and smiled before walking into the wash room and brushing her hair into a high ponytail ending at the base of her neck. She put on her outfit, a long sleeved white shirt with a shoulder baring neck hole. To cover this she put on a simple blue dress with shoulder straps just thick enough to hid her bra straps but still expose her shoulders. Long blue jeans completed her outfit and she continued onto the kitchen. Where she was greeted by a woman clearly in a mid crisis with to much make-up, and a tank top barely showing under her cooking apron.

“Good morning Kari! I made pancakes, and theirs some cut up fruit on the table. You have to eat a very big breakfast this morning, the eggs will be done shortly.” she cheerful rambled, poking at the scrambled eggs in the pan. Beside her rested a tall stack of pancakes.

“I’ll take these to the table then,” grabbing the pancakes Kari walked through the door less walk way into the dinning room where a man with frown lines deeply ingrained on his forehead read the newspaper. He looked up at his daughter entering the room and he gently placed the paper on the table.

“Your mom has gone nuts cooking. I swear she would have made you a turkey for this morning if I hadn’t said it was stupid,” he chuckled in a deep voice.

“Hey I heard that! And it was only an idea!” the mothers voice rang around the corner.

Kari sat and placed the pancakes in the center of the table, “Awww that’s just Mom.”

“You know she’s scared,” Kari’s father leaned over the table and whispered, “Are you sure that this is the path you truly must take?”

“Yes Dad, I know it scares both you and Mom, especially after ‘the 400′ but the worlds got to keep going and I don’t think Ri-nee-chan would have liked me to give up.”

“I’ve tried to change your mind every day for the last nine years, I guess it’s not going to change now,” he sigh and leaned against his chair.

“Eat up, eat up eat up!” the mother cheered walking into the room with a large platter of eggs.

After a final sweep out the house, Kari put on a belt with 6 holding tabs attached to a fanny pack. Over her shoulder she placed a large white bag holding some canned food and sleeping gear.

“Kari don’t forget your PokeKey!” her mother shouted holding up a a sliver cellular phone. And with nothing left Kari walked out the door waving.

At the edge of the yard a wooden dog house rested, “Hey! Shybone! Kari called. Timidly a Furret stuck out a portion of is head, “Shybone!” Kari called again leaning over the doghouse, “Don’t worry this will be the last time you have to escort me through the River Wood Forest, once we get to Daisy Valley you can run yourself back here as fast as you like, okay?”

Shybone slowly crept out from the security of his dog house and together they walked. Faces of the neighbors passed by were a combination of proud and apprehensive. Kari calmly walked through the wisteria trees in full bloom drooping with the heavy flowers releasing a thick scent, Butterfrees vacated the trees and scattered into the sky as Sentrets rsn every direction. Nearing the forest the sound of the river gently whispered through the rustling trees. The sun peaked through the trees and Beedrills buzzed over head as Pidgeotto chased. Those two being the strongest pokemon one could find within the River Wood Forest.

The river splashed and rushed underneath the wooden bridge and the sound of Kari’s footsteps clunked as she crossed where Shybones footsteps were inaudible over the roar of the river. Shortly there after the two passed a large in a clearing with a lower branch clearly snapped off.

Another a low growl distracted her from the rumble of the river. There was a Pokemon, a very unhappy Pokemon very close by. Shybone ran to Kari’s side and hid behind her legs. The growling became louder and louder and Shybone got closer to Kari’s legs violently shivering. The strongest Pokemon within the forest should be no stronger then a Beedrill or Pidgeotto, the only Pokemon which crawled on the ground and should be able to growl would be a Zigzagoon or a Ratata. From the brushes emerged not one or two but THREE Houndooms. At the mere sight of such strong opponents Shybone did what any coward would do and turned tail and ran, leaving Kari unprotected, with three angry Houndooms.

Kari slowly backed away her hounds out in front of her and her heart racing, the three Houndooms continued to follow her. Not looking the in direction of which she was backing into she found herself right against the tree with the snapped branch from her childhood. Desperate she glanced at her feet where a thick stick lied, slowly she picked it up and prepared herself. The middle Houndoom leaped into the air and bite through the thick stick, breaking it into a thousand pieces.

“Are you stupid?” a young girls voice rang from the tree branches about Kari, “Taking on a Houndoom with a stick? That’s the Most Moronic act I have seen in quite some time.” Looking up Kari saw a young girl, she had long wavy gray hair, a gray dress with long droopy sleeves coated with white frills. She tightly clutched a well made Beautifly doll and she glared at the seen below her.

From her tree branch she leapt to the ground and it seemed as though she floated, or fell in slow motion. Her hair elegantly waving and following the rest of her in a delay, gently she touched the ground never faltering. Kari lost her breath staring at possibly the worlds prettiest eleven year old. Removing a single arm from her precious doll her flicked her long wavy hair and glared at the Houndooms. “Well Mongrels, have you lost the thrill of a hunt?”

For some reason the three hunkered down and backed away slowly before one on the side pounced forward, baring fangs, the young girl merely held out her arm and allowed it to Crunch on her arm. Her piercing blue eyes glared at the Houndoom before she smirked, “What’s wrong? You call this a Crunch Attack? It tickles.” continuing to hold her doll with her un-bit arm she kicked it in the stomach, the Houndoom released her arm and was sent flying into a neighboring tree. “Next?” all three growled and ran towards the town of Daisy Valley.

The girl then turned to Kari, “What were you thinking, you pathetic fool? Three mongrels against a trainer who couldn’t train a cowardly Pokemon? They would have snapped your neck in two.”

“Umm well,” Kari raised her arm to her chest, still in shock and slightly intimidated by the world’s strongest, scariest, and mouthiest eleven year old, “I was borrowing my family’s pet Pokemon to get my own from the professor in daisy valley.”

“Tch” the girl responded, “I will escort you the remainder of the way to the Daisy Valley.”

She brushed her long hair off her shoulder again and began her track to town.

“What the Hey is that kid?”

A/N:

This was orignally posted on my fanfiction.net account as Ki-nee-chan and on my second deviantart account at Ki-nee-chan. Please please PLEASE PLEASE leave a comment and let me know that I can fix!!!!

Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha, but I really wish I did. That Mangaka is a genius for creating it.

My Dear Babies

Chapter 2

Kagome awoke happy about the dream she had. She wish that she could remember how they look but she only remembers how the hair looks. But them she remembered that she was raped and started too cry.

“Kagome, dear, are you there?” Someone asked from outside Kagome’s room.

Kagome just continue crying. The person opened the door to reveal that is her mother.

“Kagome, dear, what’s wrong?” She said while getting near her.

“Oh mom.” she said while crying harder.

“What is it dear? What happen?” she said while trying to calm her.

“Mom…” she began. Then she finished telling her mother all that happen last night until she founded her just now.

“Dear…I don’t know what to tell you but I know that everything is going to be all right. Maybe there was something wrong with him, him all being a demon and his eyes red and all. But everything is going to be all right dear. I’m here for you. Your whole family is here for you” Her mother reassure her.

“Maybe you’re right mom. But, why mom? Why?” Kagome said.

“Only he knows Kagome” Her mother finish.

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Kagome finished packing. She went down stairs, said good bye to her family and went towards the well.

When she got to the well, she jumped and the usual blue light came and was gone fast. She began climb. When she got to the top, there coming towards her was Kilala.

“Hi, Kilala. Thanks for coming.” Kagome said.

“Meow” was her only response.

“So…Where should we go? We have 2 days.” She began. “Umm…Maybe we should go East? Or maybe South? North?” Kagome said thinking hard of where to go. “Ok, we’re going East. We’ll stop by Kouga and Ayame to say hi and see how things are going after they mated. We’ll thing were to go after that. What do you thing?” Kagome said while petting Kilala.

“Meow” was her response.

“Ok, then lets get going.” When she said that Kilala transform into her bigger version so that Kagome could get on. When Kagome got on, she took off the ground and Kagome put a spell over then so that the other would see them or smell them.

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Sesshoumaru awoke in his chamber, felling insecure. The last thing he remembers before loosing control to his beast is being on heat. But now he was sure he was not in heat at the moment. What had his beast done while he took over?

He exhale his body to find that he had a smell of a human wench on him. He growl. He knew what had happen. Even though he couldn’t remember what happen he knew that he had runt with a human wench. But with who? The scent of the woman was familiar but he could say from who it was.

He got up from his bed and went to his private hot spring. He didn’t want any human wench scent on him. But from where did he knew that scent? Doesn’t matter, because he will find that human wench. And he will find her.

He got out of the hot spring, went back to his chamber, went to his clothe, took out his usual clothes and put it on. He exit his room, and went down to the dinning room.

When he entered the dinning room there was Rin in there.

“Lord Sesshoumaru!” Rin said when she saw that Sesshoumaru entered the room and went running to greet him.

Sesshoumaru just patted her head. The guards bow to him. He continue walking to his seat on the head of the long table. When he sat in it, a door from the other side opened. From it came demon waitress with the food on there hand. They put it in the table, bow to Sesshoumaru and went out quickly by the door they came in.

Rin waited patiently for her lord to first eat like she was thought. When he did, she started eating with manners even though she was a 12 years old girl she didn’t want to make her lord look bad because of her.

When Sesshoumaru finish, he left for his studio to do some paper work.

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It took about two hour to get to Kouga’s cave but they did. When they got there Kouga and Ayame where outside the waterfall waiting for her. ‘They must have smell me’ Kagome though while Kilala was descending from the sky.

“Kouga, Ayame. How have you been guys?” Kagome said while giving the two of them a hug. When Kagome stepped back the three of them where shock. The three of them where shocked because of the same thing. The marks on there faces.

“Wow, Ayame, you’re expecting?” said Kagome said, trying not to say what she saw. Kilala was on her shoulder.

“Yes, I’m with pup.” Ayame said.

“How long is it? Do demon pregnancy different?” Kagome said all excited.

Ayame just laugh. “Yes they are, but first, lets come inside and I can explain it to you.” Ayame said pointing to the cave.

“Ok.” Kagome said entering the cave. Kouga and Ayame glance at each other but she didn’t notice.

They talk for a long time about demon pregnancy. Ayame told her that demon pregnancy is 4 month long and they are difficult, but that for some they aren’t, and other things.

“Hey, a want to ask you something” Kagome said.

“Yeah?” Kouga said finally talking.

“What is that sun on your forehead?” She said.

“What? You can see it?” Kouga ask surprise.

“Yeah, why?”

“Because only some people are able to see it. It has a spell in it.” Kouga said explaining.

“Oh, then what does that mean? Ayame has it too is it because she’s your mate?” Kagome ask curious.

“I can’t tell you now but yes that is why she has it.” Kouga said

“Ok” Kagome said understanding

“Kagome, what is that crescent moon on your forehead?” Ayame ask.

Kagome was shocked. She didn’t know what to say. How could they see through her spell? “T-this is make-up. Yes make-up. I really love the crescent moon so I made a crescent moon with my make up even though it’s pink; I think it’s good like that.” Kagome said congratulating her self for making an excuse so fast. ‘They won’t believe that’ she said to herself.

“Oh. It looks good Kagome” Smile Ayame while rubbing her big stomach.

‘They bough it’ Kagome though in disbelieve. “Y-yeah? T-thanks” she said not knowing what to say anymore.

She stand up, “Well I’m sorry but we have to leave now. Thanks for having me by. Bye see you again.” Kagome said while sitting on a transformed Kilala.

“Ok. Bye Kagome. See you.” Said both of them.

When Kagome was out of sight, Kouga turned to the cave and started talking. “We leave to the western Castle. Prepare my mate and my things.” He finished.

“Yes sir!” said the wolfs in the cave.

Disclaimer: Angel Sanctuary is property of Yuki Kaori, the craziest, most awesome, most astounding, most jaw-dropping shoujo mangaka out there (well, if you’re into her somewhat gothic, macabre style, that is).

by Fang Shinobi

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He was the favored son of God

Bearer of light, loved by all

How one so high would fall so low

To the deepest depths of Hell

Where he was king, still loved by all

No one knew, not me nor you.

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But on his dark throne in hell

Surrounded by the fallen

Like a chiming, resounding bell

He could hear her voice a-calling

He knew he had to take her

The three-winged angel Alexiel

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With her eyes that knew no fear

She drew him into her prison

The garden where the trees

Forbidden fruit they bear

And on this holy soil of Eden

Tread he dared on leaves crimson

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She took his hand when he came, but

‘Twas not long they were together

‘Cause by His curse she was lost

To die mortal deaths forever

Through her every life he follows

Without ever rest or pause

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All his memories forgotten

He did not know why he loved her

But in his heart she was there

So he follows her without a care

Of who he was or what he was

Compared to her, they did not matter

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In her last reincarnation

He who has pursued her

Stayed faithfully by her side

In her new life, he was a brother

For she, now a man, loved another

This another was his sister

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A guardian angel or a demon

Which one he was he did not care

When he looks upon this boy

He does not see her silken hair

Nor her lips of deep crimson

He had not expected to love another

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Once the favored son of God,

Once the mighty lord of Hell

How one so high would fall so low

To die for his three winged angel

Knowing they could never be together

No one knew, not me nor you

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A/N: I took Creative Writing class last semester, and while we were writing fan fiction (yes, our teacher is also a fan of anime, manga and fan fiction, wow, I know) I suddenly got inspired to write this. Lucifer’s story is just so whoa. I really hoped he could have his Alexiel, aw. Anyway, I couldn’t finish it in time for the deadline though, so I submitted something else. But one night, inspiration struck me once more and I finished the poem (it was last October). Here it is now. Any comments? Critiques? I’m not much of a poet lol. The parts about Setsuna seem so off lol. Any suggestions for improvement? (Btw, this was first submitted on my FFNet account under the same user name.)

Disclaimer: I didn’t create Gakuen Alice. I didn’t create Avatar. It’s a parody. Higuchi Tachibana’s orginal story most likely wasn’t this. It’s just a fan fiction, enjoyeth.

Pre-note: Can you find the parodies that I put in this story? There’s a whole list on the bottom, so let’s see how much of Gakuen Alice you remember!

And the story goes like this…

There were multiple small explosions going off around this little house in the countryside. Loud screams shook the birds off their branches, which seem to be a mix of anguish and boredom.

“RUKIE! Why’d you have to leave me for some private genius school in the city? I’m so lonely and bored without you! More or less furious that you left me with a half turtle bitten note right before you left. I thought you said that you weren’t going to use animals for your dirty work, y-you cruel jerk! Don’t even reply to my letters…” And then some more complaints coming from a 15 year old girl wearing a jean miniskirt, t-shirt and sandals whose name was…well, you’ll see.

“Natsuko, quit your yacking! Rukie’s not gonna come back because she randomly has super hearing abilities. All you can do is write to her, and see? You’ve got a postcard from her now,” said Natsuko’s grandma.

Natsuko was somewhat excited, but it didn’t show in her face. “Give me the postcard. I really want to know what Rukie has to say after not replying to me for these past few weeks.”

And thus the letter stated as proceeding, “Dear Natsuko, The guys in this academy are so much better looking than in the countryside. I hope you’ll find a good man one day. Love, Rukie Nogi. P.S. I need more carrots.” After Natsuko finished reading the letter, she crumpled it in her hands and chucked it halfway across the lawn in front of her.

“WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!?” she yelled into the sky. She then ran out to the crumpled postcard and smothered it into the ground for a second round. “That’s it! I can’t handle this anymore. Grandma, I’m borrowing your money reserves and going to the city to get Rukie back. If she doesn’t comply because of some guy, I’m going to drag her.” She stomped all the way to her room and packed some of her stuff. Then, dumped the jar of money into her wallet and some in a plastic bag, which she put in her luggage. She grabbed a hat and put it on and ran out of the house to catch the next train to the city.

“Crazy kids…” her grandma murmured.

Following along with Natsuko, she gave up on trying to run all the way to the train stop and stole some kid’s bike to ride instead. Within an hour, she made it to the train just in time to go to the city where Rukie was at. She sighed in relief and started thinking.

Maybe this is fate…It’s kinda weird that I made it to the last train that was leaving. Or maybe, my punishment is coming really soon. Oh geez, Rukie, what are you making me do?

Natsuko got off the train and skipped the sight-seeing; she just asked some people and found her way to Alex Academy. She stood there for a moment to take it all in. In moments, she was going to see a long lost friend. Now, how she was gonna get past the 30 feet gate was another story. She tried to persuade the guard to let her in, but he was too stubborn to do so. Then, she thought about using fire, but she didn’t want to ruin the gate, it had its reason for being there. That’s when she saw a large tree and it hit her.

Maybe I can climb the tree and jump it like a ninja. That’ll work, it has too.

Natsuko hurried towards the tree, it was nighttime and daybreak was bound to happen soon. She climbed the tree and slowly kept her balance on the tree branch. Once she got towards the skinny part of the branch, she got a momentum going and jumped over the gate walls. Little did she know what was right behind those walls, a boy attempting to sneak out as Natsuko was trying to sneak in.

The two collide into each other. Natsuko on top of the boy and the boy almost knocked out unconscious.

“Oww…Wha-Who are you? And while, you’re telling me that, mind getting off of me?” he asked in a daze while rubbing his head.

Natsuko paused for a moment after she brushed herself off. “Uhh…I could ask you the same question,” she retaliated.

“Mikune Sakura. Now tell me your name.”

“I’m…someone. Later!” She tried to run away but ankle stopped her and almost fell, until Mikune quickly acted and caught her. They both landed on the ground again, with Natsuko on top of Mikune in an awkward position. This time, they were actually unconscious.

A teacher came by and heard the racket. “Oh dear, who have we here? Mikune and…a girl? This could be troublesome.” He called for backup and carried the two students into a school building.

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“Uggh…where am I?” Natsuko scratched her head waking up to find herself on a sofa. “My clothes are different! That guy from last night is here too.” Natsuko panicked and tried to stand up, but she didn’t fall or trip. All of a sudden, her ankle was healed. She checked a nearby mirror, her wounds and everything were gone. Her black hair, all tangled and her clothes looked like a school uniform. She continued to look at herself in the mirror when someone came in.

“Natsuko? Oh my goodness! Natsuko, what are you doing here?” cried a girl in excitement.

Natsuko turned around. There was Rukie! Rukie was rushing towards Natsuko when, all of a sudden, a small burst of flame caught on her hair. “You big fat idiot. How dare you leave me without a warning!”

Rukie was jumping around, trying to put out the embers in her golden long hair. “Ahh! Don’t do that Natsuko! Don’t use it here, of all the places, don’t use it here!” begged Rukie.

That’s when the teachers came into the room overhearing their conversation. There were two; one was a gorgeous woman in her 20’s that had a luscious blond perm wearing a dark short dress in black high heels. Another was a man who had short black hair and was wearing a t-shirt, jeans and sneakers.

One spoke out, “Narumei, is that the girl you were talking about, the one who might have an alex?”

“Truly it is Misaki, she kept crying out the name ‘Rukie’ and so I brought Rukie and look see, this girl has a fire alex all of a sudden,” replied Narumei.

Natsuko stared at the faculty members questionably and turned to Rukie to ask, “What’s an alex?”

“Oh great, you blew it Natsuko, you showed them your alex. Now you have to enter the academy. I was trying to keep this from happening…” sighed Rukie.

“Keep me from this?” Natsuko argued, “In your stupid postcard, you told me to bring you some damn carrots! And there they are!” She pointed angrily at the bag of carrots on the table.

Another student entered the room hastily. “Mikune! How come you’re here and not in class? What happened you idiot?” some random boy complained.

“Would you believe me if I said that some countryside girl jumped the academy’s walls, and crashed into me in the middle of the night?” Mikuen asked. The boy looked at him shamefully, with crossed arms and shaking his head. “No? I didn’t think so, but it happened! See? It’s that girl right there.” He pointed at Natsuko.

“Who do you think you’re pointing at, buster? Don’t make me flame you.” Natsuko threatened, but Rukie emphasized her arms into an ‘X’, telling Natsuko that it was a bad idea.

“Try me,” Mikune challenged.

“Don’t…That’s a stupid idea Mikune, don’t embarrass the girl, or yourself for that matter,” the other boy said monotonously. The two teachers were just watching and listening to the conversation and occasionally conversing with each other about mysterious topics.

“Hoteru, don’t butt in,” he mocked.

“Pay me some Yennage and I’ll butt out within a blink of an eye,” Hoteru shot back.

“Whatever, just bring it, summer girl.”

The two had a staring contest, and then finally, Natsuko looked like she was prepared to attack and Mikune looked ready. That was, until she said, “Hey flower boy, nice polka-dotted boxers. Pretty manly.” Mikune looked down and Natsuko used her alex.

“Oww! Oww! Owwwch!!! Gah she’s good,” his brown hair in flames, but it quickly dissipated.

Natsuko was laughing in victory, but she was concerned about his hair. “Wha-? How did you stop my fire?” she asked.

Rukie stepped up towards Natsuko, “Easy peasy lemon squeezy, he has the nullification alex. Which pretty much means, almost any alex’s won’t work on him, including your fire alex.”

Hoteru came by Mikune’s side and said, “By the way, I realize you don’t know what alex’s are. Alex’s are special abilities given to you through birth, only so many people have it. As you already know, Mikune has a nullification alex. If you want to know, which I’m sure you do,” he grinned mischievously, “I have the alex of technology.”

“So, that means, Rukie, you have the alex of animal pheromone?” Natsuko observed.

Before Rukie could reply, Narumie clapped and walked towards the students. “Congratulations, Natsuko Hyuuga, you’re officially admitted to Alex Academy. You seem to learn quickly and you’re well educated, you’ll fit right in with the other students. Misaki is getting the class president and she’ll show you around the school, the ropes and everything. Until I get your room issued, you’ll have to make do with Rukie, would that be okay?”

“You say what?” questioned Natsuko. There was too much to take in for her. “Rukie, explain it to me in less than ten words, so I don’t have to process so much words that are coming from this weirdo’s mouth.”

Rukie thought for a second, “You’re attending Alex Academy from now on.”

“Nicely said,” commended Hoteru and Mikune.

Natsuko jumped on the sofa and finally smiled, “Ha. I must be special.”

End of Chapter One Manuscript

Higuchi: So, how was the story?

Editor: It…was okay. You know, I think it’s interesting, but it’s not going to pull readers in. It’s just going to be one of those plots where, it’s typical and you know what coming. You know what I’m talking about?

Higuchi: What do you think I need to do to improve it?

Editor: I think, to make this story interesting, you have to change your characters a little bit.

Higuchi: A little bit? Just tell me what I need to change; I don’t want to ask any more questions. Too tired for something as strenuous as that. I have to eat my Clementine in peace you see?

Editor: Sure. Your main character is okay, but why is she perverted and mean? She’s too clever and controlling. She actually has talent too! Your main character should be dopey and brainless, with little or no talent. She should have a lot of weaknesses and have to get through some obstacle. Natsuko is a weird name too, it sounds like something from Avatar or something. You should change it into something cute, like Mikan. While I’m on the topic of names, who names their kids Rukie, Hoteru or Mikune? Rukie? I mean come on! That’s over rated. You should change the best friend into someone who is heartless and cold, but occasionally shows her soft side. Give her a name like, Hotaru or something. Then your other characters, to replace the two boys names, call them Natsume and Ruka, that sounds hot and cute, respectively. Something that flows better than Mikune or Hoteru. Next, the teacher Narumie? She sounds too sexy for a teacher. Turn her into a guy so that readers won’t have to read about a teacher romance. Talk about yuck. Call him, Narumi. The class president is a girl? BORING! Let make it a really cute, dorky and shy guy. Oh and about the title of your story, ‘Gakuen Alex aka Alex Academy.” What kind of name is that? Make it something cuter and catchier like, “Gakuen Alice aka Alice Academy.” Got that Tachibana-san?

Higuchi: Err…yeah. I have one more question though.

Editor: Yes?

Higuchi: You didn’t critic Misaki-sensei?

Editor: Oh him? No, he’s perfect.

Typer’s Note -

You know you liked the ending because that’s like the main reason I wrote the whole story. Anyways, hope you laughed and found out what I changed. Hope it wasn’t too confusing. Reviews would be nice, if you can manage to type one up, even if it’s less than a sentence? Sankyuus and hope you enjoyed. Written in 10.29.08

Can’t imagine what Natsuko and Rukie looks like? I drew them…sorry if it’s bad.
Go to my profile and check them out in their uniforms…

Story Notes {Let’s see if you found them all or most of them.} -
Parodies, besides the one’s in the Editors long list of changes.

1. “you left me with a half turtle bitten note right before you left.”
Here’s the ironic thing, Hotaru, left Mikan with a windup turtle and a note, but since this is ‘Ruka’, it’s an actual turtle instead.

2. “Rukie was rushing towards Natsuko when, all of a sudden, a small burst of flame caught on her hair.”
Now it’s the opposite. Pretend Rukie is Mikan and Natsuko is Hotaru. Instead of punching Mikan with one of inventions, Natsuko owns Rukie with fire. Go figure.

3. “Yennage”
That just essentially means, ‘pay me money’. In case you were confused.

4. “Whatever, just bring it, summer girl.”
‘summer girl’ comes from Natsuko’s names. ‘Natsu’ is summer in Japanese I believe. Girl because…well, Natsuko is a girl.

5. “Hey flower boy, nice polka-dotted boxers. Pretty manly.”
‘flower boy’ is a reference to Mikune Sakura’s last name. Although ‘sakura’ is cherry blossoms, essentially I think of it as flowers.
Second reference is to the polka-dotted boxers. In the orginal manga, Natsume would make fun of Mikan, here, she’s just mocking him.

6. “Ha. I must be special.”
This one was a tough one to get. When Natsuko says this, it’s ironic because in the orginal manga, he is a Special Star.

7. “something from Avatar or something.”
What I’m talking about here, is that it sounds like Zuko from Avatar: The Last Airbender. Natsuko…Zuko…Get it?